FIRED FOR CARRYING AT WORK

[K.C.]

One guy's story, pretty interesting.

[bogey1]

I bitch a lot about finances and lack of labor etc, but I'm so glad that can never happen to me.

[GunLawyer001]

I don't have 20 minutes to watch a video about a guy getting fired; I wouldn't talk to him at a party for 20 minutes about this.

People who want eyeballs on their videos need to learn how to draw viewers in, with efficient verbiage, fewer dramatic pauses, no disgressions. He could likely summarize what happened in 5 minutes or less. AT LEAST do a 20-second Executive Summary up front so we can see if the story is worth our time. Maybe have it be a dialogue with him and a hot chick in a bikini asking questions.

I don't bother watching most network TV, and they have professional writers trying to make things interesting for their 20 minutes of non-commercial programming every half hour.

Just some feedback.

[Walleye Hunter]

I don't have 20 minutes to watch a video about a guy getting fired; I wouldn't talk to him at a party for 20 minutes about this.

People who want eyeballs on their videos need to learn how to draw viewers in, with efficient verbiage, fewer dramatic pauses, no disgressions. He could likely summarize what happened in 5 minutes or less. AT LEAST do a 20-second Executive Summary up front so we can see if the story is worth our time. Maybe have it be a dialogue with him and a hot chick in a bikini asking questions.

I don't bother watching most network TV, and they have professional writers trying to make things interesting for their 20 minutes of non-commercial programming every half hour.

Just some feedback.

Fuckeen A, man. As a person with attention deficit disorder, you best have something worth watching to draw me in. I clicked on that long enough to see how long it was then clicked it off.

[STBear]

Fuckeen A, man. As a person with attention deficit disorder, you best have something worth watching to draw me in. I clicked on that long enough to see how long it was then clicked it off.

Did the same. Summary is the title.

[ROCK-IT3]

Did the same. Summary is the title.

It can be watched at 1.75-2x and still be understood clearly.

[Exbiker]

I skipped through most of it but even still that's about 8 minutes of life I 'll never get back.

[free]

Did the same. Summary is the title.

A title isn't a summary. It's a title.

[Walleye Hunter]

I don't have 20 minutes to watch a video about a guy getting fired; I wouldn't talk to him at a party for 20 minutes about this.

People who want eyeballs on their videos need to learn how to draw viewers in, with efficient verbiage, fewer dramatic pauses, no disgressions. He could likely summarize what happened in 5 minutes or less. AT LEAST do a 20-second Executive Summary up front so we can see if the story is worth our time. Maybe have it be a dialogue with him and a hot chick in a bikini asking questions.

I don't bother watching most network TV, and they have professional writers trying to make things interesting for their 20 minutes of non-commercial programming every half hour.

Just some feedback.

Fuckeen A, man. As a person with attention deficit disorder, you best have something worth watching to draw me in. I clicked on that long enough to see how long it was then clicked it off.

[free]

I don't have 20 minutes to watch a video about a guy getting fired; I wouldn't talk to him at a party for 20 minutes about this.

People who want eyeballs on their videos need to learn how to draw viewers in, with efficient verbiage, fewer dramatic pauses, no disgressions. He could likely summarize what happened in 5 minutes or less. AT LEAST do a 20-second Executive Summary up front so we can see if the story is worth our time. Maybe have it be a dialogue with him and a hot chick in a bikini asking questions.

I don't bother watching most network TV, and they have professional writers trying to make things interesting for their 20 minutes of non-commercial programming every half hour.

Just some feedback.

A fucking men!!!

People bitch about me asking for a summary...but honestly, how fucking hard is it to write a couple sentences to make something interesting enough entice people to watch a video? Not worth your time? Video not worth mine. You don't care? Neither do I (;

This is why movies have trailers and books have some verbiage on a book jacket.