25 Yard Buckshot Test: 11 Assorted 12 Gauge Loads Using IAC Hawk 981R Shotgun

[The Shadow]

25 Yard Buckshot Test: 11 Assorted 12 Gauge Loads Using IAC Hawk 981R Shotgun- Part 1- 3

This is part 1- 3. Hope you find this helpful.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qWYqCHRHEsc

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X9qvWQPeo5o


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_RGMaoGLmr4


Terry

[625]

Cool. Thanks.

Although, for people like me that have borderline ADD, the third video is the only one worth watching.

[Hawk]

I'm worse than you. I couldn't even sit through the first 60 seconds of the 3rd one.

[The Shadow]

I'm always open to constructive criticism so, what can I do to improve my future test videos to make you want to watch all of it?

Terry

[redeye202]

I'm always open to constructive criticism so, what can I do to improve my future test videos to make you want to watch all of it?

Terry

Introduce yourself- Hello, i am The Shadow [stop right there], introduce the weapon-this is a ####[stop right there], introduce the ammo you will be using[ a very SHORT description], show already set up targets [1 for each round to be used], then SHOOT, after putting 1 round in each target, show what each target looks like, then thank the people for watching. THE END

KEEP THE BABBLE TO A MINIMUM.

Make more SHORT AND TOO THE POINT VIDS.

[The Shadow]

Thanks, I appreciate the input! These are my first attempts at this type of video and everything just comes off the top of my head. I am trying to tighten up my delivery and shorten the videos while still delivering info that people can use. While I might go into more detail than you or I would need, my intention is to make these especially helpful to beginners. Hopefully I'll get a little better with each video.

Terry

[BimmerJon]

I'm always open to constructive criticism so, what can I do to improve my future test videos to make you want to watch all of it?

Terry

EDIT them for time

There's only 3 mins worth of info in a 20 min video

Setting up shots, walking to target, staring at dirt is pointless to keep in

[redeye202]

Thanks, I appreciate the input! These are my first attempts at this type of video and everything just comes off the top of my head. I am trying to tighten up my delivery and shorten the videos while still delivering info that people can use. While I might go into more detail than you or I would need, my intention is to make these especially helpful to beginners. Hopefully I'll get a little better with each video.

Terry

Good man, i look forward to more of your work.

[The Shadow]

EDIT them for time

There's only 3 mins worth of info in a 20 min video

Setting up shots, walking to target, staring at dirt is pointless to keep in

I accidently left in some stuff I intended to edit out. Since it takes a long time for my computer to render the final movie I didn't feel it worth the time to redo it. I did the walking to the target speeded up with the Bennie Hill theme scene to provide a little humor and entertainment value. I try to add little things like that because I don't want my videos to be all Joe Friday just the facts m'am.
I don't recall any scenes of me just staring at the dirt unless it was the aforementioned part I meant to cut out.
Only 3 minutes of info? Really? I thought I did better than that. Can you send me a link to a Youtube video that you consider a model for me to go by? I really do want to make my videos as useful as well as entertaining as I can!

Terry