Starting a hunting/Firearm related site!

[BandanaBandit1]

Okay everyone so since i wanted to help educate people more on hunting and the use of firearms im making a site. i would really appreciate it if you guys could take the time and tell me what i can improve on! i plan to add a new topic/blog every week so stay tuned! Heres the URL...

http://howtodeerhunt.blogspot.com/

Thanks! Have fun!

[SpudCrushr]

Proof read for grammar and spelling. Right off the bat I saw there was no space between the welcomes. Also, "i" should be capitalized. This will help establish your ethos with the reader.

PICTURES!!!! ...they are lacking (actually non-existent). Perhaps a picture of the different types of deer (white tail vs. mule), a hunting rifle, hunter dressed in his camouflage with gun perhaps? Don't overwhelm the reader with pictures, but a couple would be cool and draw attention.

Cite your sources. I, as well as many other people, cannot stand plagiarism. I assume you got some of the information from Wikipedia? In the comment by "E", who I assume is your user name or whatever, if says citation needed after each paragraph. Cite your source and remove those two works. It screams copy / paste and shows a lack of proof reading / editing.

Good information though; interesting read. You asked for comments and improvements so I gave you what I had. Good luck with your blog.