Letter to Senators

**mrpaiste** · September 16th, 2009, 02:44 PM

Attached is a letter I faxed to both US Senators from PA. It address the second amendment and other rights in general, and the appointment of anti-gun individuals to Czar positions by the POTUS. I know it's a little longer than recommended for a letter to Congress, but I can't help it . . . I'm a bit verbose.

I'm not a lawyer or an english professor, so please take it easy on me with your critiques.

But, feel free to use any or all of it yourself if you like.

**PisnNapalm** · September 16th, 2009, 02:48 PM

You should have posted here first before faxing....

I am writing to you as a concerned citizen of the Commonwealth of Pennsylvania and
these Unites States of America.

EDIT:: Nicely done aside from the typo.

**velkly** · September 16th, 2009, 02:53 PM

You have a very nice letter. My only nitpick, after a first reading, would be to spell out USA in your last paragraph.

Unfortunetely, I think you are a bit late on requesting opposition as Sunstein has already been confirmed by a 57-40 vote on 9/10. Though, it never hurts to make your opinion known!

**mrpaiste** · September 16th, 2009, 03:14 PM

Originally Posted by velkly

You have a very nice letter. My only nitpick, after a first reading, would be to spell out USA in your last paragraph.

Unfortunetely, I think you are a bit late on requesting opposition as Sunstein has already been confirmed by a 57-40 vote on 9/10. Though, it never hurts to make your opinion known!

Ooops, is my face red!

I mis-read the email I received and didn't realize he was already confirmed. Well, the rest of it still applies.

Now, if could only be more attentive when I proofread . . .

**1927A1** · September 16th, 2009, 11:00 PM

I've always had a tough time proof reading my own writings, as you read it even the mistakes look ok, because you know what you want to say. If others read it they can pick problems out pronto.