FIRED FOR CARRYING AT WORK
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I bitch a lot about finances and lack of labor etc, but I'm so glad that can never happen to me.
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I don't have 20 minutes to watch a video about a guy getting fired; I wouldn't talk to him at a party for 20 minutes about this.
People who want eyeballs on their videos need to learn how to draw viewers in, with efficient verbiage, fewer dramatic pauses, no disgressions. He could likely summarize what happened in 5 minutes or less. AT LEAST do a 20-second Executive Summary up front so we can see if the story is worth our time. Maybe have it be a dialogue with him and a hot chick in a bikini asking questions.
I don't bother watching most network TV, and they have professional writers trying to make things interesting for their 20 minutes of non-commercial programming every half hour.
Just some feedback.
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GunLawyer001
I don't have 20 minutes to watch a video about a guy getting fired; I wouldn't talk to him at a party for 20 minutes about this.
People who want eyeballs on their videos need to learn how to draw viewers in, with efficient verbiage, fewer dramatic pauses, no disgressions. He could likely summarize what happened in 5 minutes or less. AT LEAST do a 20-second Executive Summary up front so we can see if the story is worth our time. Maybe have it be a dialogue with him and a hot chick in a bikini asking questions.
I don't bother watching most network TV, and they have professional writers trying to make things interesting for their 20 minutes of non-commercial programming every half hour.
Just some feedback.
Fuckeen A, man. As a person with attention deficit disorder, you best have something worth watching to draw me in. I clicked on that long enough to see how long it was then clicked it off.
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Walleye Hunter
Fuckeen A, man. As a person with attention deficit disorder, you best have something worth watching to draw me in. I clicked on that long enough to see how long it was then clicked it off.
Did the same. Summary is the title.
Re: FIRED FOR CARRYING AT WORK
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Originally Posted by
GunLawyer001
I don't have 20 minutes to watch a video about a guy getting fired; I wouldn't talk to him at a party for 20 minutes about this.
People who want eyeballs on their videos need to learn how to draw viewers in, with efficient verbiage, fewer dramatic pauses, no disgressions. He could likely summarize what happened in 5 minutes or less. AT LEAST do a 20-second Executive Summary up front so we can see if the story is worth our time. Maybe have it be a dialogue with him and a hot chick in a bikini asking questions.
I don't bother watching most network TV, and they have professional writers trying to make things interesting for their 20 minutes of non-commercial programming every half hour.
Just some feedback.
Fuckeen A, man. As a person with attention deficit disorder, you best have something worth watching to draw me in. I clicked on that long enough to see how long it was then clicked it off.
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STBear
Did the same. Summary is the title.
It can be watched at 1.75-2x and still be understood clearly.
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ROCK-IT3
It can be watched at 1.75-2x and still be understood clearly.
Narrated by Munchkins!
Noah
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I skipped through most of it but even still that's about 8 minutes of life I 'll never get back.
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TL : DW - he ran his mouth.
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