Re: Lost or stolen handguns, a letter I am writing. Feedback requested.
First, use your computer's spelling and grammar checker. It will catch misspelled words, typographical errors, and grammatical errors. All it takes is one error and the recipient will make note of it in his/her mind and will make you appear less than what you intend. All of us occasionally misspell words or commit typographical errors.
Second, shorten everything up. Too many words and you've lost the reader. Focus on the salient points. In other words, keep it short, sweet and to the point. All of us occasionally lose sight of the goal.
You raise some valid points in your letter. Hammer them home.
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